Shot layout (how it turned out and original ideas)

Originally the shot lyout was going to be a little different but heres a rough idea of how the shots are going to be layed out:
Light over Collage , Zoom in on picture , Collage again,　Running　 up stairs,　Newspaper shot, ‘Lucy’ looking at paper, running again( slowed), someone (not shown) looking at the collage, running up to room with cuts in on person, over shoulder as she walks in a classroom, her walking into classroom, teacher writing title on the board.
From the original idea to how it turned out the concept remained the same although a different atmosphere is created in the shots now. Its a combination of quick cuts with rushed, fast pace and longer quieter shots but still remain tense. I am quite happy that through filming the idea of the teacher writing the title on the board (and date) and the zoom in on the date of the paper to signify the circular narrative.